Finding My Angle

 

There’s a slippery slope

That is dry as a bone,

My only hope

Is using my traction skills to hone.

 

I try not to be a dope

When I’m on the phone,

Trying to really cope

Maneuvering ‘round life’s orange cones.

 

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ohh this inclined plane of life.. we just get stuck there.We try to f8ght against the odds but we slip and fall freely to the awaiting doom.. how much we try to maneuver around the orange cones of life we slip.. Liked the concept of this poem. A very nice scribble indeed Amigo. ;)

~Sophy

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much Sophy, appreciate the feedback.

[Linda alexander]

Survival of the fittest theory, adaptation theory, live simple think royal theory, choose battle wiselytheory, cut and trim down those you pull you down, let it go theory, tomorrow is the key,etc all can give us a hand in this slippery slope life to cope, well done my friend

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I love your analogy of my poem, thank you so much for sharing your thoughts.

[Linda alexander]

You welcome, take care

[Aethereal]

Most of us just go slip sliding along all of our lives till we fall over the edge. I was inspired to write this tiny gift poem for you:

Falling

On a glassy slope
of ice covered stone
I had lost all hope
of not being thrown

far from reach of rope
to the Great Unknown
where I’ll claw and grope
as I fall alone.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you for the very cool retort.

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! I just had to do something with those "own" and "ope" sounds.

[J.Paddy]

The words slid of my tongue as smoothly as syrup, but unfortunately my handicap (two bouts of summer school for geometry) clouded the meaning of this piece. Still, Ance, the words felt wonderful to speak aloud. Sorry I can't critique.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very kindly sir, I appreciate your feedback.

[Matching Socks]

Oh, nice pic to illustrate friction and kinetic energy. :)
Which are healthy in a relationship.
Love this one, it's unique.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[Matching Socks]

Anytime Cowboy. :)

[DIVYA]

We have to use all our maneuvers to get through this tricky twisted life. Very well said Dale. So appreciated!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much hon, glad you appreciate the scribble that come from my mind.

[DIVYA]

It's always a pleasure to read you and your thoughts.