Hollow In My Holler

I hear an echo

Bounce off these self made

Canyon walls,

It is your speech

Trying to fill the void,

But these hollers

Remain hollow

Cause voice

Has no substance.

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Just brilliant. At the same time, Randy Travis is echoing in my mind.

[Kayleigh]

Ah my sweet, this can be interpreted in many ways as you already know and by reading a few comments they can completely change. For me, I see it like it is and can relate. You have such a way of writing that even a short poem can hook them and leave them wanting more. Loved it babe

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much darling :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

"Self- made canyon walls"- this very well depicts how we are not inclined to listen and follow our own voice.. We become too engrossed in listening to others that we fail to recognise it. Splendid write :)

~Sophy

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is a great interpretation of my poem… thank you for you great input.

[Sophy Freebirds]

You're welcome muchly :)

[Mark]

While I too agree, I see a personal message in the spaces of LA LA LA, the words were carefully chosen

Echoes of hollow substance

Very clever indeed ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much sir.

[Madalyn Beck]

Ok, I have to say, I thought of the exact same thing as KL. Her and I have a similar mind track apparently. Haha! Great write, Dale. Very clever! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks so much Maddy, bald you enjoyed my little scribble.

[Lyn Anderson]

How interesting. For me this is like a "LA LA LA I can't hear you" when I am mad at someone.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh I like your interpretation of this poem. Thank you.