Me Against Myself

 

One on one,

Oh it is on again,

Me verses “the mirror”:

 

I shatter its reflection,

It curses me with bad luck

For years to come,

Nobody wins in this war.

Reviews

[David Scott]

How true Dale. We never win if we fight with ourselves. Encouragement! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly sir.

[emmajoy]

A clever, amusing and dare i say it - reflective poem.. .. and so horribly accurate! Many thank yous for posting this brief but lyrically succinct poem, Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You dared saying it. :)
Thanks classy lady, glad you enjoyed my little scribble.

[emmajoy]

:))))))))))

[Eve Ola]

few words but its perfect

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Kayleigh]

We are our own worst critics, love. I think we both know that well enough. I love you lots, just the way you are...xoxox

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes we are, and you know all too well I am own worst enemy, over thinking things and getting bad thoughts in my head. Thank you babe xoxo

[Kayleigh]

No baby, not "bad" thoughts... It's jealousy and you don't need to be jealous my love, ever. xoxo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are too kind darling, Love you

[Briana O'Connor]

Such a short, yet sweet expression of the way we battle our inner inferiority complex! I love how you expressed this idea simply and elegantly. Very well done. thank you for sharing and keep up the good work!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much for the very kind review :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

It reminds me of my poem "Humbled hubris".. stunning piece of work buddy. Really i like the mirror description.. destroying our own identity.

~Sophy

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much, I will have to check that poem out.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Lol... was a pleasure buddy :)

[Rita L. Sev]

The depth of this brief piece is amazing, Dale. What we do to ourselves... Saving this one.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe shucks, thank Rita :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Just stunning greatness. That is all.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly sir.