You Make Heaven Hotter Than Hell

I just can't help myself when it comes to her.

 

I know heaven

Is not surrounded in flames,

Yet you are my angel

And hot as hell,

So much so that

You set my desire on fire,

Continually,

Like no one has before.

Making my libido

Go from a pyre

Into a forest fire,

Where the trees

Rise from the ashes

Like the Phoenix

Being reborn as petrified wood.

Now you know

I am a romantic at heart

Who adores our candlelight talks

Over dinner

And cuddling up while watching

A good love story,

But making love to you

Has become my favorite obsession.

I will always enjoy the times

We just chill out

After a long day,

And being your support

When you’re not feeling that strong,

Even though I will

Always be thinking about

Tasting, caressing

And pleasuring

Your gorgeous Goddess body.

Reviews

[Purplerose]

Luv it!!! This just so cool! You're a master of words. Enjoyed!! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe shucks, your gonna making me blush.

[Purplerose]

You need to take a bow....this is brilliant! :)

[s y e]

HA! Well someone is in love.... Someone has the hots for someone!!! Hahaha, this is sexy and sensual, Dale. I am sure Kayleigh loves it, what a lucky lady she is.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

She says she loves it and make no mistake I am the lucky one.

Thanks so much sweet Sye.

[Sophy Freebirds]

An angel hot as hell!! Damn it Dale! I loved that line. I am sure Kayleigh is so darn lucky to have you. This poem is sensual yet filled with care and concern. ( as true love should be).. the leaning love,faithful love,hotter than hell love- gosh!! I got a complete package here. :) thumbs up boy. Great job.

~Sophy

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much Sophey for your kind review

on a side note, I am the lucky one.

[Sophy Freebirds]

You both are ;) was a pleasure

[MsJewel]

Beautifull soft and sensual, I could feel the emotion, the passion in your words.
A gorgeous poem for the one you love!

:) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much Julie, I appreciate your flattering comment.

[Kenneth The Poet]

This poem is like the red setting on your bathtub faucet.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

hahaha thank you kindly sir.

[David Scott]

You go Dale!
I love it!
After all, what good is being a cowboy without enjoying having some "petrified wood" now and again? Too obvious. Ha. :)
Well, I must say I can relate to the joy of being revived in the fountain of a loving woman...
There is nothing like it!
Great capture of emotion and experience.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you kindly sir… and you are right cause there is nothing more beautiful than the love of a good woman.

[Fran Marie]

oh my, but you got it bad ...you are so romantic with your love poems to your lady love..
a sexy lil' piece you've written here..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much Fran, yes I have it bad, How could you tell? LOL

[Lyn Anderson]

I love the honesty of this. And how, when it's this good, you wonder if you can ever keep your hands off her.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you kindly, I love honesty, especially when it makes the person feel good.