Hate to admit it, Cowboy, but I still use this game to make important decisions:)
On a more serious note, this poem of yours struck a chord with me because I have a tendency
of being "fossilized" into my ideals, ideals that not only are impossible for anybody to live up to,
but even me, the fossil, in the rock... Still, holding yourself and others to higher standards is a good thing, unless of course. the preacher himself, is stealing from the collection...
I enjoyed the messages in this piece, Dale.
Thank you.
Diego
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you for the review and your in-depth thoughts on a personal level. Much appreciated.
Sometimes it is the game of a child that can teach us the most valuable of lessons - you illustrate this in a clever way! That piece of paper may also well be full of holes made by the hard hitting punches of life........
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Yes those kids games certainly can, and so can kids movies and kids themselves teach us adults.
That is the beauty of the old children's games and stories..they taught lessons, stretched the mind and body..
Really liked the way you used this simple game and brought it into adulthood..
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much big sis… I have a knack of making something simple complexed.
11 Years Ago
that is the beauty of being a poet.. a different eye
It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
About
Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
This is my world of
my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..