Dancing By Myself

 

Dancing…

 

                  By myself,

 

Using moves…

 

                  Long forgotten,

 

Knowing I’m…

 

                  Out of style,

 

Feeling…

 

                  So alone,

 

Without a…

 

                  Beat to guide me.

Reviews

[maria ( rose)]

hahaa this is great! I'm sure you still got it :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you on both accounts.

[Lydia Shutter]

Suddenly the music has changed and you know you are dancing to the tunes of the past...literally and figuratively. No need for beat to guide you....let the music in your heart and soul move you. It is said dancing is the poetry of the feet. This poem reminded me of that quote. Lydi**

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh I love that quote, thank you for sharing.

[Pryde Foltz]

LOL. Well turn on some tunes, you silly loon;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Darn why didn't I think of that. :))

[Linda alexander]

Clear expressions, well penned, simple but too deep, I may suggest visit the soul, research in to self, visualize the best song and dance, it may happen and you will dance with the symphony of soul and the whole universe irrespective any dance floor or beats , just a thought my cerebrum hinted,

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Great advice, thank you so much.

[Linda alexander]

Take care friend

[Ladysue]

Dale, when you dance by yourself, you find the beat and then the dance floor is yours!!! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much for the great advice tiny dancer.

[Lyn Anderson]

This is as smart as it is simple. A really solid write.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, appreciate the kind feedback.

[Rita L. Sev]

"If I had the chance, I'd ask the world to dance, and not be dancing with myself..." This is what is now playing in my head, Dale. The dance goes on, whether we go onto the floor or not... there's great depth in the simplicity here...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes you are right bout the dance going on no matter how many people are moving to the rhythm. Thanks Rita

[TL Boehm]

I still sing into my hair brush and pretend I'm Stevie Nicks when no one is looking.
Dance while you can.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Great choice, love Stevie Nicks… thanks Tammy but when you have two left feet you tend to hurt yourself a lot.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that beat died out long ago....we danced to the beat of the 60's---but now the music is so different, life is so different...radical was then, radically different is now...and i don't like the song.

i do like this poem a lot though...it made me dance to the old beat, if only for a memory.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I totally agree with you, thanks for the feedback Jacob.