Happily Oblivious

 

Dizzy dandelions

Sway with

Softhearted sunflowers

Never minding the

Talkative tulips

Passing judgment on the

Married marigolds.

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Sometimes it's nice to just enjoy the flowers for what they are...their colours, scents, textures and so on...sometimes what you don't know really doesn't hurt you...sometimes the less you learn, the more you know...you can learn a lot from nature, but nature is also meant to be enjoyed as well, and I enjoyed this piece very much...well done Cowboy :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I do believe you are right, thank you for the insightful feedback.

[Beccy]

Loved this, especially the choice of words to describe the different flowers, they seemed to fit perfectly.

I can just see those tulips gossiping away the garden fence.

Beccy.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you very much Beccy

[Fran Marie]

nice alliteration within these lines...I especially like the softhearted sunflowers...neat write!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much Fran.

[Matching Socks]

Nicely done Cowboy! :)))

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks so much Ana :))

[Norah]

Indeed nice alliteration you got here! I love this wonderful little poem ...excellent write :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you again.

[Marie]

Nice alliteration...fascinating flowers.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Marie :))

[Frieda P]

Gotta love a dizzy dandelion, dang tulips always so judgmental! ;) Good stuff Dale..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much Moonbeam.

[Frieda P]

Thank YOU for the smile. :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Never minding the
Talkative tulips
Passing judgment on the
Married marigolds.

Flowers can be fickle and harsh. A delightful anthropomorphic write, Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much :)))