I Can't Moonwalk (10W)

 

If I knew how

I would step back

In time.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

if I could close my eyes I'd paint a thought ..

.. of you adventuring that time as distinctly as you've written your would-be moonwalk! ..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for sharing your thoughts classy lady.

[Rita L. Sev]

Or perhaps forward with wisdom? ;) Clever ten here, Dale!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well we have no choice but that, just sometimes it would be nice.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and do it, doing the moonwalk....

this is a good dance....i'm for going back, too.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks Jacob, oh if only it were that easy.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

You speaking of going back in time Ha...Ha
of can you not really moon walk ??



This was funny and very cleverly written.


Thank you for sharing and your kind
review and comments you left on my page.


Blessings. Benita

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Talk bout going back in time of coarse… thank you, glad you like my metaphoric rambling.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

HA..HA yes it was short and funny and sweet. and love how you can say them in a few words. You're welcome. Blessings. Benita

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Blessings to you to :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too. I have many things I would of done differently. You said a mouthful in so few words. Thank you my friend for sharing your poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir, I think we all have… all part of being human, just sometimes it would be nice to go back and redo certain moments.

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes it would.