Witch Way

Something with a fun theme for the holiday mixed with a deep message.

A hocus here,

A pocus there,

A wicked laugh in the air,

An evil cackle bouncing off the walls

Casting a spell in surround sound

Until all the innocent children’s ears

Ring with a demonic tone.

Some will fall deaf to the sound

And some will turn it up to ten,

All depending on which way

Their soul chooses to go…

Up or down.

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

A great little Halloween poem with a strong message. Good and Evil reside in everyone, but Evil lures from its black soul costumed in light, while Good often comes packaged unappealingly. I really like the way your poem has highlighted this and gently warned against the alluring presentation by which Evil comes to us.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You have interpreted it very well…. thank you very much for the review.

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think we have too much hocus pocus in congress...

wonder witch way their souls will go...
they trick more than treat, and we the people, suffer...BOO!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Now that is so very true, that wasn't my intent but I like the way you think. Thank you.

[Marie]

Very nice, light-hearted, for the season.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Marie… it is a challenge to find creative poetry for the holiday.

[LadyAnn68]

Just perfect of this time of year! excellent idea about the soul choosing which way to go...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you young lady, I appreciate your support of my writing.

[LadyAnn68]

Where were you last night??? I Won my 6th 1st place contest today....here is the link: http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Promote-Me!-VI-%28Peace%29/50367/

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I was on a date last night … congrats on the win.

[LadyAnn68]

A DATE?????? OMG...NO someone else got you??? Boo-Hoo!...LOL hahahaha I hope it was lovely and special! I haven't been on a date in million of years! I am not sure I would even know how to act.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That was my first date in a couple years.

[LadyAnn68]

Wonderful...were you scared???? I would be so frightened...isn't that funny?

[Sami Khalil]

A nice whimsical write for the holidays appropriate for all ages. I like the play on which way to witch way. Bravo, sir...:)........

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you ever so kindly sir.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome, sir...:)........