Lingering Reminders

Just a little something something.

 

I can still taste your kisses on my lips,

Smell your juices on my fingers,

It is so sweet how they linger

Reminding me how much I need you.

Branded on my brain, carved in my soul

And etched on my heart

Are the promises, fears and desires

The two of us share.

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

So splendid and greatly expressed.., When it comes to feelings the shortest way is the best, as it`s clear and sharp. This little piece is sensual and romantic in the same time. It has accent on belongings and living within each other, I like the phrase "etched on my heart". Very honest and nice.

:: nour ::

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank so much sweetie, you are too kind :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Nice. I like this one. Honest. Raw.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you again, much appreciated.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Branded on my brain.carved in my soul... ohh yes!Forever.. true lines from your heart. :) this is what love is like. Its not possession its mutual sharing and understanding. And Dear friend you have written it all too well. God bless :)

~Sophy

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe shucks, thank you so much :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is really love...and when you can share both fears and desires...a relationship is likely to last---just as the taste lingers.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Again so very true, thank you Jacob.

[Pryde Foltz]

Branded on my brain, carved in my soul
And etched on my heart

It would seem one and only one person is able to do this to you … I had to get a whole new brain … there's some Halloween humour for you.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

hahaha, that is funny, thank you for the review.

[MsJewel]

Quite a little something something if I do say so -
Lovely my friend

:) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you Julie, you are quite a lovely something special yourself :)