Communication Breakdown

To be owning a habitat

Is a habit all you shouldn’t  own,

Trust in the nature of your instincts

And your instincts will become natural,

You must grow into your wisdom

Or wisdom will fail to grow within you,

So listen closely to what I say

Cause my words turn a deaf ear when you shout.

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

Still trying to grow into my wisdom; an important endeavor. Great advice, Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Actually I think we are always growing into wisdom to keep it fitting our place in life. Thank you Rita.

[Jennie Baron]

Truer words were never spoken and I also like that last line.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank so much Jennie :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Definitely shouting isn't the way to go, though some of us have less patience than others and occasionally resort to our baser instincts.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh I know, I am guilty of it once or twice.

[Lyn Anderson]

My kids say I am not scary when I yell, so it's kind of an ineffective thing anyway.:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

hahaha, maybe they are fibbing you so you'll stop…. hmmmmm

[emmajoy]

' Cause my words turn a deaf ear when you shout.' - i smiled at that because tis like an amen to the wise words you've created before it .. how very true that fifth line, Dale!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very much classy lady, your kind word are appreciated.

[emmajoy]

Pleasre. :)

[Matching Socks]

Every parent that yells at their kids you should read this.
Hate seeing that...
Great wisdom here.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Ana for sharing your perspective on my poem.