Naturally Spiritual

Haiku or senryu? Depends on your interpret it.

 

So weather or not

You are ready to see God,

Nature is our Church. 

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Nicely penned my friend.

Always love reading Haikus since
I can't write them worth a flip Lol...😜

But God's gifted
me with much in
writing and other things.


But I really enjoyed reading
this. Hugs. 💜

God bless Benita

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

I think a hybrid of both. Very powerful as well. We often seek God and religion in temples and fail to see and realize it is present everywhere in the nature. After all God is the creator of all things living and breathing.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well said Nadia... Thank you.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Very interesting- I've never seen anyone write something being a senryu and haiku at the same time. I also like how you wrote "weather" instead of "whether"- it clearly amplifies the element of nature in your writing.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much... glad your liked and understood what I was saying.

[Bright Ocean Star]

Nice Haiku! These short ones are starting to fascinate me. You can read so much into them when they sit there staring at you with their brevity. Fascinating! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

SO glad you like it. I love the challenge of saying something in few words.

[Max64]

I thought the poem had not loaded. My surprise at the brevity and clarity in the words. It is truly very open to the reader as to the meaning. If not brilliant, close there to! Great job.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very much.

[Marie]

I think this is definately a senryu, and a very good one.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Marie.

[Jesse]

....and our body our Temple. Very nice Haiku! great job!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the double meaning of "weather"

Nature is where we see him, in everything.....

nicely done...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I couldn't agree more, thanks Jacob.