Sin Of Reproducing

 

Impeach the incubus

That spawns an angel

Within the dreams of the succubus,

For two evils don’t do any good

In producing an offspring

That will lead a much needed

Armageddon.

 

Snap, crackle, pop

Is fine for a children’s cereal,

But won’t produce

The big bang that will bring

Humanity to its knees

To pray for a chance at

 resurrection.  

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

What are we bringing the babies born today into? Dark clouds in your words, in spite of the snap, crackle and pop - or perhaps because of it... Great piece of pondering here, Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Rita for the review and sharing your thoughts.

[Beccy]

Mhhh, natural selection Vs selective breeding; not such a tough call when you look at society today.

Perhaps it's just the natural order of things, that 'higher hand,' nudging us in an inevitable direction so he can start over.

Really enjoyed this. Beccy.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Very interesting thoughts... thank you for your input.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

excellent piece of poetry and philosophy as well...especially the "big bang" part...love that.

i do think armageddon might be closer than we think...too much hate in the world right now.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You may be right.... and thank you for your thoughts on my poem.

[Lydia Shutter]

A powerful write....perhaps a bit of a Chicken Little view of the world. I am not sure Armageddon is so close. People who are not nice will spawn....happens every day and has happened since before we were here. Your words are filled with fire and brimstone. I liked the Rice Krispies reference. Lydi**

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much for that wonderful review, so glad you like it.