Freewill (Written By God)

 

 

The moment you were born

Time plays the reaper

In the story of your life.

 

When you forget to appreciate

Those that touch our heart

Time will play fate

In the story of your regrets.

 

In those moments you follow

Your passions and desires

Through hell all the way to heaven

Time gets to play determination

In the story of your destiny.

 

Every time you use hope

As a beacon in the darkest hours

Time is going to play the roll of faith

In the story of your self-belief.

 

Life we always be the star

God casts in our play

That we write the script for,

And there are no retakes or encores,

Just the curtain call.

Reviews

[Sakuya Ashiro]

This is an amazing poem, it speaks to the heart and reminds us that we live however we want. You conveyed your message in such a beautiful way.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so very much.

[Fran Marie]

Life is what we make It..the freewill to live as we choose ..a powerful piece with a great message..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Franny.

[DIVYA]

So live as if it's the final act. Indeed, love, gratitude and faith are the pillars of a life well lived. Appreciated so much...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you hon for your wonderful thoughts on this poem.

[DIVYA]

You are welcome hon.

[barleygirl]

Even tho I do enjoy your unusual observations about fate, faith, & life, I really didn't get the idea of "Freewill" (the title). In fact, this seemed to convey the opposite of freewill to me. As a message from God, you get high marks for not sounding like the other 10,000 poems written thusly. You've definitely crafted some original ways of stating the tenets of life! *smile*

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you for sharing your thoughts... I appreciate you telling me you didn't get it... what I am saying is God gave us freewill and in every thing we do we control life with that freewill.

[Lyn Anderson]

Some heavy thoughts -- well written overall. In first line, I believe you meant were, not we're, and I think you might have meant life will always be the star, not we.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you again for the review and catching my error.

[Sheila Kline]

Your faith shines through in your words Dale, and they are an inspiration to me to ever cling to words of promise that have been given to us as how to live our life, and our just reward! God does cast our play; we just need to do our part! Hope is always ours to use as part of the light to destroy the darkness!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly Sheila... I give a big AMEN to your review.