I Want To Breathe You In

 

I want to breathe you in

Until my breath

Smells like your skin

So I can share the scent

That reminds me

That love is truly life.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

There is a vivid beauty in the scent of Love, something that stirs and senses and the soul. You breathe that out so beautifully in this tender vision.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well said my poetic friend.

[Dhaye]

Love is truly life. Well-done poem in its brevity!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you sweetie.

[DIVYA]

A brief yet powerful expression of love. Appreciated so much, dear Dale. ❤

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you dear Divya... it don't take a lot of words when expressing love.

[DIVYA]

You are most welcome ☺

[ba_mcfarlane]

Sweet and passionate and revealing a poet's open heart. Great work.

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Awww..........Lovely .........nice....


Jazz

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Jazzy

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

You are welcome....:)

[Warrior]

Even with it being short it still is able to convey the love theme. Your idioms such as breathe in, shows how much love is in the writers heart for whom ever they are talking about. Good job.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you very much.

[Lyn Anderson]

beautiful and romantic, and a very strong sentiment -- I might have one suggestion -- consider taking out the of in the last line.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much for your review... always nice to hear from you.

[Lyn Anderson]

You are very welcome. always.

[barleygirl]

Sweet little vignette describing the way smells make connections very strong for some of us. Your words are brimming with love & affection in general, not only for the beloved in this tale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly golden girl.