Ballad Of The Phoenix

 

 

Ashes do not remain dormant

When the myth proves its reality.

When fire in the sky

Burns brighter than the sun

A legend gets its wings

Giving daylight immortality.

Even if midnight finds a way

To clip its wings

The torch will still burn

In the house of the Holy

In the form of a lunar fire.

Reviews

[kitty]

Out of ashes the Pheonix will surely rise. That is the hope I hold so dear. Beautiful piece.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[kitty]

My pleasure!

[Light and ashes]

This is beautiful. May we all rise like a phoenix every time we fall. Nice to review you again friend.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Light and ashes]

Welcome :)

[barleygirl]

This is an awesome playful unexpected stream of image-filled observations. This might be one of your best, as far as a smooth flow of brilliant compelling ideas. The message feels like a tangle of heavenly bodies dancing to the crackle of the immortal fire! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you dear Marige. Always a pleasure when you like my work.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I feel like im riding on the back of a dragon! swooping through the air, torch burning bright in my hand, screaming out my war call. I can save this world! Very inspiring!!!!!!!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe, thank you. I love to hear I can be inspiring.

[MomzillaNC]

Terrific ballad. Brilliant lines: “A legend gets its wings; In the form of lunar fire."

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much. Hope all is good with you.

[MomzillaNC]

You’re welcome. I’m feeling much better and getting my strength back bit by bit.

[sette]

it is one poem wherein it can have various interpretation and it is one challenge on my part on how to interpret it for me it signals time for change and to be free at last

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I love that it gives you different interpretations. That makes me smile. Thank you.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

had me humming Led Zeppelin immediately...

the phoenix will rise eventually....just like we can no matter how down and out we are...we can rise from the ashes and make ourselves fly once more.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

How right you are, thank you for your feedback sir.