Heaven In Space

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The sun and moon are the saints to earth

While the stars are angels Looking over them,

that is the cosmic truth

even if you’ve never been to space.

For you don’t have to be an astronaut to be touched

By that that lives in that that never ends.

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

Your poem captures the incomprehensible expanse of time beyond imagining, while we dance out the comparably infinitesimal blip of our own existence.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you for the feedback

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome

[Fran Marie]

To acknowledge such force and depth
which surrounds us and to appreciate
the heavenly bodies of the cosmic universe
at play ..one only needs to absorb the beauty
of it all

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you farn for the feedback.

[Sami Khalil]

Your poem is heavenly. Your style is stylishly creative. Your wisdom is breathtakingly worthy.
Awesome my friend .

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much.

[LadyNaida]

Infinity is what drives us to pursue the unknown. The longing to know what lies beyond the moon and the stars. This is s very beautiful and deep piece. I love it!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you so wery much

[LadyNaida]

You're so welcome. I always enjoy reading your work. I had been gone for a long time and now I'm back.