Unchained Me

Unchained Me

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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For the Lymerexes contest

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Once there was a me

Chained to a ball of misery

But by the brace of God

The hurting lock broke itself

Leaving me to be happy

And my true self.

© 2009 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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I think you hit the nail on the head with the last two lines... "Leaving me to be happy/and my true self."
Kinda hard to figure out what it is exactly that's chaining us up and making us unhappy; likely not gonna do that ourselves. Gotta get a little Divine intervention to help. Nice job with this. Lot said with so few words.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Another fun piece. Excellent job.

Posted 16 Years Ago
Thsi is really good. No damn fair. LOL

Posted 16 Years Ago

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool



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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..