Within One Another

 

Timeless minds eye to eye

         Atmospheric revelation

         Distinct connection

         Euphoric distraction

 

Historic cardiac reset

         Airy needs

         Cured wings

 Synchronized dreams

 

Life’s symbolic hurdles

         Mountains scaleable

         Rivers traversable

         Broken roads interchangeable

 

Within the world

         We are ourselves

Within one another

         We are each other

Reviews

[Amethyst Moon]

Hey thanks for the review! you know what I am open with myself always, however I live in my mind more than anywhere else so I'm not too social.
I truly love the message that was potrayed in this poem, especially the flow
and ending lines.
I agree with you,
we are all within one another.

[Wicahpi]

I like this style! Each new stanza beginning with a statement followed by
it's description. I find that I enjoy doing this, also.

My favorite is "Life's symbolic hurdles"

Well Written! I enjoyed the read.

Peace n Light

[ape domenigoni]

Wow...I like this one a lot! Great job, Cowboy! :)

[An owl on the moon]

What a profound, philosophical write that somehow takes in the world as well as the inimacy of the soul.. Beautifully done in every way!

[Rhine Wolf]

yet again you never end to amaze!!! wow!! past present and future all wrapped up in one and yes the last stanza was truly brilliant!!

[Ladysue]

Wow cowboy, this is a very profound piece of writing. It makes you think. Great depth and vision within this...another outstanding write from you...

[Katie]

The last four lines of this poem left me in 'awhhh' This was so beautiful and different than what I used to reading from you. Very refreshing and sweet. Great job!!

[An Ordinary Woman]

Very nice, Cowboy. It is romantic, soft. Tender. A good write. Is love in the air?

[hoyt]

Very good and thoughtful poem , written in a unique style. A nice and deep message as well. Great job
Hoyt

[Sheila Kline]

hummmmm....very deep and insightful, but wonderful with a futuristic insight!
It is an amazing write that I must read again so that I completely take it all in.
The last verse sums it all up

Within the world
We are our ourselves
Within one another
We are each other.......This could be a signature verse....I Love it!!