The Nature Of Your Beauty

reposted: took it down a while ago, tried to find it in my trash and restore but wasn't there so I had to repost it.

 

Awakening in the morning

to the sight of the sun

kissing your porcelain face.

How envious I am,

yet I understand the attraction;

For if I was the brightest star

highlighting God’s creations

I too would want to cast an accent

on the truest beauty

that brings tears of joy

to even the reddest of roses.

 

For even the flower of love

can see that the radiance

that reflects off your angelic face

outshines the most eloquent of petals

like a rainbow caressing

the rainy sky.

 

Your face is a mortal version

of a snow capped mountain

reflecting off a crystal lake…

 

Even nature is left breathless.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

I think I reviewed this one a long time ago now.. but I will go ahead and review again as it's reposted and certainly a writing worthy of a good review. This was very nicely written and a great tribute to the beauty you've found in another.. the ending superb.. great line "even nature is left breathless".. I really enjoy your free flow and you give a unique twist to words! Good job!

[Joanna Maharis]

The imagery throughout this piece is beautiful, and captivating. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece. It's reminiscent of "Sleeping Beauty".

[J.Black]

Always knew you were talented, Dale. This is beauty in poetry. Screw nature, iI'm left breathless. Sigh.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

A most beautiful poem .. love the comparisons .. it is gorgeous ..
Very nice writing!

Chloe

[zombiikillah666]

this is so beautiful. amazing (: love it

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Wow Dale! I am left breathless.....I just love your poetry, I am a big fan. I hope you know that.

[Ashley]

"like a rainbow caressing the rainy sky"
beautiful imagery!
another job well done. your poems make me want to swim in your words.

[just rose.]

Really really lovely, especially the last line which is both revelation and confession. Wonderful.

[EmpressPoetess]

GORGEOUS! Any woman would swoon to be so depthly described!

[Shellie]

:)