The Nature Of Your Beauty

reposted: took it down a while ago, tried to find it in my trash and restore but wasn't there so I had to repost it.

 

Awakening in the morning

to the sight of the sun

kissing your porcelain face.

How envious I am,

yet I understand the attraction;

For if I was the brightest star

highlighting God’s creations

I too would want to cast an accent

on the truest beauty

that brings tears of joy

to even the reddest of roses.

 

For even the flower of love

can see that the radiance

that reflects off your angelic face

outshines the most eloquent of petals

like a rainbow caressing

the rainy sky.

 

Your face is a mortal version

of a snow capped mountain

reflecting off a crystal lake…

 

Even nature is left breathless.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

I think I reviewed this one a long time ago now.. but I will go ahead and review again as it's reposted and certainly a writing worthy of a good review. This was very nicely written and a great tribute to the beauty you've found in another.. the ending superb.. great line "even nature is left breathless".. I really enjoy your free flow and you give a unique twist to words! Good job!

[Ed Hart]

once...in a life time...

[closed account]

i am glad you reposted this, it was very beautiful!!

[Jenny Nelson]

It was beautiful the first time I read it and it still is.

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is beautiful. You told a kind and heartfelt story. I like the gentle description and the ending was outstanding. Thank you for the poem. Words of appreciation for a woman.
Coyote