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A shining star heart

And Olympic torch passion

Simply cause of you.

Reviews

[Joanna Maharis]

This is such a beautiful piece filled with captivating feelings.

[Brittany W]

Short and simple, but the points clear as day, Great work, loved it.

[Norma M Sutton]

Very nice. I see you've been hooked too lol

[Dezaraye]

Awwww. I love this! Everyone wants to be loved this way.

[Forever Mine]

This is differant from what i'm used to reading by you, and I must say, I like it : )
I have always liked haiku, because it is short,simple, and to the point. This was no exeption, You convyed so much love and passion in this, its unreal

[Wicahpi]

I'd say that's quite the find :)

[Angel Bird]

These three lines tell such a great story of love and passion in an erotically charged symbolic.
Beautifully done.

[Ladysue]

wow this was excellent...so beautiful and so well done...

[Liza]

concentrated words of admiration expressed beautifully

[Coyote Poetry]

A few words. A beautiful story. A excellent short poem. Thank you.
Coyote