When It Comes To You

 

When it comes to learning

you are my personal guru.

When it come to funny

you are my morning cartoons.

When it comes to toughness

you are a pure diamond.

When it comes to softness of the heart

you are completely Egyptian cotton.

When it comes to sexiness

you are Marilyn Monroe 2.0.

When it comes to a total woman

there are no comparisons.

When it come to my love for you

outer space is just a coffin.

Reviews

[Seashell]

Pedestal comes to mind...I'm sure any woman would abso love hearing this come from a guy whom she admired.
Nicely put.
Thanks CB
Babsx

[Joe Shetina]

I absolutely love this.

[M I N D Y]

interesting... no rhyme, no rhythm, just pure comparative. last lines are the best lines... an end to the unknown and an opening to beyond it. love that!

[Liza]

what a beautiful way to hold someone in your mind, heart and soul

[closed account]

very nice!! soft, matter of fact and of course the ever metephoric!!

[Daytonight]

I absolutely love this! Very wonderful images you have painted with your skillful pen. Keep up the great work!

[.]

LOL..brilliant..love every line..lucky girl

[?]

Wow the perfect woman, where did you find her. lol
This was amazingly beauftiful
Such a wonderful tribute to that special one in your life.
Hold tight

[Phibby Venable]

i love how she exceeds all his expectations.
a wonderful love song. Like how it grows.

[Muse]

The brevity of this made it all the more sweet. What a tribute to the love in your life! Well penned my new friend.