No Moses

No Moses

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

 

The Genesis of seven sins

Originates from one mortal emotion

Just like seven rivers

Flowing from a red sea

That could never be parted

By a miracle. 

© 2011 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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The true sin is not being true to oneself...which...according to many was created by the one true god. So not being true to yourself is in essence denying the omniscience of the god many profess to believe in. Just sayin...

Posted 14 Years Ago


It is true that we are never parted from sin, though some of us think we are...it is just the way the human psyche works, what needs to happen is an examination of conscience, that usually brings us down to earth with a thud.
There is always a chance of a miracle if we believe that God sees fit to give us one. Not sure I understand the 'Genesis of seven sins originating from one mortal emotion' Perhaps you could enlighten me?
BTW, the original sin was disobedience...

Blesssssssssssss

Posted 14 Years Ago


Humanity is what is is, Genesis proves it .. we're all miracles in our own small ways and never parted from sin or otherwise? Have to think this over a little .. not sure if there's more or the six fine lines I can read. You certainly have a way with words, always have but in four or so years your thoughts have deepened and deepened on occasions..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Cool!

Posted 14 Years Ago


So in simple creation I was this path "as is" with belief in only the moment...:) interesting write :) xxx

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is making me think almost too deeply. Genesis, the orginal sin of temptation took place here, spiraling forth the world of sin we know today. Catholics say we are damned by 7 deadly sins. Rivers flow with or without human intervention....... a metaphor for the thought that we are predestined with damnation or salvation?

Posted 14 Years Ago



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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..