True Colors

a senryu

 

The rainbow’s colors

Are only the beginning

In knowing life’s gifts.

Reviews

[closed account]

very true...

[PaleWriter]

A great senryu with insight and wisdom. Your poems are never disappointing. Great job.

[brittneymarie]

Simple and sweet, but it has a powerful meaning. Thanks for sharing !

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your shortness opens up an entire story of life and its beauty. sometimes the quick poems are the most detailed because of the thought processes behind it. it's like you have a wisdom behind this whole thing, a wise old idea. obviously i see a rainbow when i read this, but i see a rainbow that has so many things within it, cities, towns, smiles, tears, life, simply LIFE.

As they reflect in all spectrums, thank you for making me smile today!

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smiling..lovely to wake up to this..

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Dale I saw the title and thought of the beautiful song by Cyndi Lauper.
You are so good with only a few lines.
Inspirational beauty here.

Chloe

[Kenneth The Poet]

Wow!

[EmpressPoetess]

I love the idea of this; behind the rainbows beauty is the realities we all wait for. Exceptional writing!

[emmajoy]

Beautiful .. true. Some words i so want to embroider, add a little touch of colour, frame, then hang in a conspicuous place to be read regularly .. :)