Heat Of The Moment

 

I listen to the piano

softly hum its tune

in black and white.

Closing my eyes

to let the darkness

broaden my view.

The wordless melody

becomes the light

in my mind

guiding my spirit

to uncharted corners

where virgin thoughts hide.

My inspiration flies

just below the angels

but high enough

to carry an eagle to safety.

Every note is the wind

beneath my wings

making me feel like Superman.

When the music comes

to an unexpected end

I open my eyes

just in time to imagine

me falling like a shooting star

then feeling the burning

of satisfaction in my eyes

till I am blind.

Reviews

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hahaha this reminds me of a little tada I wrote a couple years back,, A Lady and her Canvas... one can take this to another level,,, I think maybe I did!! I loved this one. I knew I can count on coming back and find food for my soul.. I miss this..

[Jay Levon]

a bit of perfection

[Rhea752]

that was amazing :)

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music is food for the soul..

[*** Hey Jude***]

i am "in love" with Music! I really like your expression showing the passion you have for music as well! ~ :D

[April Child]

Wow, this is wonderful. An intense ride through rich imagery. Very nice.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Lovely work.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's amazing what music does to the soul...how it makes us soar to new heights, that we never could imagine to be possible.

The imagery you have depicted in this piece is truly inspirational... Beautifully penned!

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, I love it! Music makes the heart and spirit soar and I can hear the notes as you take us along a journey of of thought, love, beauty.

I especially enjoy the lines "My inspiration flies just below the angels". I like the format you have used - concise but with a powerful message!

[Seashell]

I couldn't live without music...well I could...but how dull would that be ?? When I switch my radio on first thing in the morning...(well before the music centre's time)...it fills me with joy...and makes a great start to the day....When I'm about to retire to bed in the evening...it unwinds me and soothes my soul....What you have described above...is exactly what I have described here too.
Well done.
Thanks for share
Babs xx