Crossing The Line

A senryu

 

The jester dances

Without even realizing

It is not his court.

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

And yet somehow, he's better at capturing the folks' attention than royalty can much of the time. Wonderful senryu, Dale.

[Hayley]

Very solid and interesting. I just think of people laughing or doing something when it isn't their place to do so.
A wise and deep piece, you have here!

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ha...shows why laughter is the best medicine..wonderful

[Aidz]

kewl :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Surrounded by distractions, perhaps?...He must be enthralled to be there, to have been misplaced, unnoticed... Nice Senryu! :)

[Ed Hart]

of course it's his court...very well done

[*** Hey Jude***]

Excellent thought wrapped into a senryu! ~ Jude :-)

[Brianna Brie]

COOL :)

[Lily Mae]

Oh I like this for so many reasons :D lol...xo