Bright Red

Sharpening my senryu skills

The blade is crimson

Still the sun’s reflection is

Perfectly golden.

 

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

This sounds like a murderer with no conscience. Well done!

[Renée]

carnivore I see lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Interesting way to look at it.

[Renée]

From my limited experience it could be haiku.... you could be talking about that red glow that flashes before the sun rises ..

[Chris]

The fine aftertaste
of a thick charred-rare ribeye,
as the sunset glows.

[Dean Kuch®]

Creepy 5-7-5 Senyru ( thank you E.L.) here Cowboy. Carvin' up the ol' homestead, 'eh? NICE!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Then I will bbq it up real nice.

[Poetic Beauty]

Ahh how a devilish act can be commuted on such a pleasant day. Love the contrast

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I love the interpretation. Thank you

[Poetic Beauty]

Welcome. My mind has its.own way of.working

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is what I like about you.

[Poetic Beauty]

I am pretty food at finding the real meaning to pieces too and thanks I like being who I.am

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

you are pretty food? LOL

[Poetic Beauty]

Food? Sang I think you need to go.get something to eat

[Poetic Beauty]

Damg

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

you are the one who said pretty food silly.

[Poetic Beauty]

Lol.Damn autotext it was suppose to be good

[Christina]

Short, but sweet. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you :)

[Lily Mae]

Such great depth and meaning in a few words.... x

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You think so pokey? I didn't know you knew the meaning of depth, LOL

[Lily Mae]

Your a jerk and you know I do :P

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oppps didn't i forgot you would see this, LOL
You know i am kidding, well kinda sorta :)

[Lily Mae]

Oops..that means I'll catch hell from your friends for calling you a jerk lol ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You catch heel anyways... I think you attract it... after all I am proof :)

[Lily Mae]

Moi? Little ol me? I seem to and it stinks lol..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

NO... that is your armpit ;P

[Satire69]

Perfectly gross! Sorry, but this is too bloody for me. x

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Ahhh I think you are taking it to literal, it is strictly metaphorical :)

[Satire69]

metaphors are still gross. LOL

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Okie dokie ;)

[Debbie_Philly]

Your Haiku pack a punch.... I love the imagery here !! :)