Bright Red

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

Sharpening my senryu skills

The blade is crimson

Still the sun’s reflection is

Perfectly golden.

© 2012 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Love this!! simple but has a punch! awesome!

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

13 Years Ago

Thank you sweetie.

The shining love note
Reflection is lovely gold
Killed by it's own fate

Did I do the syllables this time right? lol
Oh so keep it up! amazing Senryu, I should do more too,
But not find the mood... love to reply through.

E.L.

Posted 13 Years Ago

13 Years Ago

Yep you got the syllable count on the nose... And it is a wonderful response. Xoxo

13 Years Ago

Yay! I did it :D thank you for the wonderful senryu's the one who understands the difference of them.. read more

Helen Crutchett

Helen Crutchett

Liked this a lot. Keep up the good work Dale!

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on July 3, 2012
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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..