Six Foot Confession

Once a senryu always a senryu

 

Things written in stone

Only matters when the rock

Rests above your head.

Reviews

[Debbie_Philly]

A Haiku, of sorts.... Love it... short but DEEP !!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Actually it is a senryu which has the same syllable count as a haiku but it is not about weather. Thank you again, glad you liked it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

So I visually print it in mind,
What was written...
Then it shall be soaking into
The human brain...

Always, thought no, not provoking,
Activating. Nice!

E.L.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks so much Eliza :)

[An owl on the moon]

Or if that rock can roll. A brilliant glimpse into fragility and permanence... gives me a bit of hope that I can maybe still turn my mess of a life around. Thank you!

[†Tracey†]

I like this.. How big is that rock and what does it say I wonder :D

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Good questions... depends on how you lived your life.

[MOON]

Really good image you painted here with your words , thought provoking .

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you :)

[Helen Crutchett]

What a brilliant senryu. Excellently done!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks :)

[Sir Joe]

Meaningful (=

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Powerful Senryu! Things are not written in stone, until then... This is brilliant.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks... we must remember as long as we breath we have life to live.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

So true. :)