Farmer's Daughter Haiku

The farmer's daughter

sat on the summery ground

as dawn's light beat down.

Author's Note

Wrote this for school. It's not very good.

Reviews

[Sarah]

I like it, It is short and simple.

[Archia]

I like it. I love how something so short can still have this whole story.

[Freeminded]

I think its brilliant- nicce and simple.
Maybe you could write an extended version...

[deeps]

Very lovely write, I enjoyed this

[rae52]

short but sweet i love it

[Julie Beth]

i liked it i don't know if you make a poem book in your school, but it's really fun you do all different types of poems and make a book out of it and share it with people, i think you'd be good at it anyways awesome job :)

[..]

....cute-n-different, enjoyed this ditty

[.......]

Very nicely done.