Whisper.

A sonnet I wrote for my friends homework. While writing it, I was thinking of him, and I've liked him for a long time. Also, he lives far away. You get what I mean. (:

So far away, we cannot touch, not now.
That's what you think but I know, forever,
We are always together in our hearts,
My mind will not end because now, it starts.
I will not let you fall, for I love you,
One day we will meet, we will start anew.
Don't say good bye, for we will never be,
If you run away, if you flee from me.
Hold onto me tightly, never let go.
Do not deny your heart, you love me so,
Why do you try to hide the way you feel,
Why try to run, this feeling is so real.
I know this is all so right, as do you.
Now whisper in my ear; I do, I do.

Reviews

[Frankie Warman]

...
But do you still wanna hear.
"I do"?
Reading this I know... I need to forgive you.
So I guess this is my only chance of doing it.
And its my only chance to say I'm sorry.

Heh... You probably won't even read this.

[Joselyn.]

Thank you. :)

[Wildecat]

I love these kind of poems, heartfelt with lots of emotion. A well crafted poem, such a pleasure to read.