The Flame

A mix of life and fire.

The flame flickers

Its purity comes free from its loss of heat

As if the flame is cool

But when the flame dies

It leaves a rememberance of what it once was.

Reviews

[Ysabel Reyes]

well written!

[Lively]

Soft and touching...

[alerodri]

it is fast short andgets to the point but still makes u wounder and think it gets incribed on your brain, cool

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

powerful... standing emotion throughout the lines... i loved the last two lines, a great ending.

[guiltyascharged]

Sad, but nice. Short, but sweet. I like it.
Leaves me wanting more. But cuts you off
at the peak.