Fragile Heart

My heart my heart its not very fragile but after repeated abuse it'll shatter

 it has a high pain tolerancy but as you continue to hurt it it''start to hurt

 its been through this before so it will rip scabs as it starts all over

Reviews

[Aifey Jayd]

I really like this. I wish you had something to write really happy poems about, though. Either way, I love this! Great job!

[Ashli The Amazing]

i agree with AliceBounty break it up a bit [: but i really liked it

[Alice Bounty]

You should break it up into different lines. It's a lot more organized and appealing that way. Most people don't like poems in paragraph form, me being on of them. The wording is fine as is, the only thing I have a complaint about is the whole paragraph situation.