Stuck

I am stuck in a minute of time

It makes me see things

That I've never seen before

It makes me happy

But then again I'm gone

I'm lost in a moment of time

Nothing looks the same

And I'm left there in a ball of lies

Reviews

[Bianca La Salle]

very interesting.......

[argentum lumen]

This sounds like Groundhog day. That's all I have to say.

[Maya Storm]

Decaf this is a bit twisted... I had to read it again to be sure.

I like... being stuck allows you to think about things and you get me stuck on this piece for more than a minute. The title of this is very fitting... fantastic

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

interesting, read this twice just to think about it...
nice title, simple and just fitting for it,
short enough but speaks a lot... nice write, gets ya thinking