Love sacrfice

I wish this was all just a dream

None of this seems so real

Look at you

Your changing my world up

Its been up to you

Your starting a civil war in me

This love has been true since i met you

How far have we grown apart

Has it all been a lie

I gave you a burnt offering

You threw it all away

I'll give you a soul sacrafice

What will it mean to you

Reviews

[alerodri]

love all of it makes me burn inside, makes u feel the pain

[tenkyu]

one-sided love how sad, i like the title, 'love sacrifice' very sentimental and hopeless romantic like, i respect the show of great love. love sacrifice, soul sacrifice argh that's great love!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

wow really nice, nice title, nice lines, i like how you wrote the civil war in this poem in the line:
"Your starting a civil war in me"
really nice.

[Aifey Jayd]

You really are a magnificent writer. I love reading your poetry. It is simply wonderful... full of so much emotion and feelings.