As I scream

As I scream no one comes

For no one listens

Help is what I need

Its what I'm screaming for

Nothing makes sense

As I cry out again and again

Blood starts to drip

I'm dying

No one is coming to my rescue

Its hopeless

Someone please help

Reviews

[Maya Storm]

It ends with no help? this is a sad ending, no redemption. short, sweet and to the point. I like that.

[Bianca La Salle]

love this one, you write emotion really well

[Carrion.]

i love it. amazin way to express a cry for help.

[Ysabel Reyes]

a poem that expresses the thoughts of the people who are in need. very good.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

wow... nicely said in such a short write, such feelings and a downfall into sadness and pain... this is really good