Dispose

This all seems so unreal

I must dispost of this one last kiss

I'll dispose of it like a lighter and fuel 

To show that they lies are true

And the only way is to dispose like you say

You may want respect but I disposed of it

When you last threw me out

It all hurts the truth

I set you free

When I disposed of this last love

So go live your life

I don't need you

Your love only hurts

So dispose of your love for me

Reviews

[Bailey C. Writing]

To show that they lies are true
*the
Raw emotion, strong hurt...I feel for you. Good poem, short and to the point. I like the comparison with the lighter and fuel.

[brenda]

feel what you feel i mean i feel what you feel great poem keep writing !:)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

umm is it supposed to be the word dispose in this line instead of dispost?
"I must dispost of this one last kiss"
...
and i think in this line u meant to write the instead of they?
"To show that they lies are true"
... this is deep and painful especially showed in the ending, great write

[Caitlin Lea]

parallel*, not "paralll" ;-)

[Caitlin Lea]

Definitely an interesting idea. Is there a reason you've spelled dispose with an "e"? I just wasn't sure if that was purposeful.

Like I said, and interesting choice of topic and line of thinking. I think if you edited this for typos and punctuation it would go a LONG way toward making this a good solid poem.

I really like this line; "You may want respect but I desposed of it / When you last threw me out" It is very clever, because the idea of disposal and throwing out are paralll. Wonderful wordplay there. :-)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Well penned. I can feel the emotions.

[Carrion.]

i realate :l
nicely done..