What isn't a dream

A smile while i run through a field

Seems like its a dream

A mind stuck to a single thing

It must be a dream

My heart beating for one thing

I don't want it to stop

My eyes set to one thing

But they're open

Is this a dream

I can't be then

You are my dream

My happiness

And my love

Reviews

[BrittBratt]

Very nicely written again! It reminds me of my first love. I feel it. Very nice Decaf :)

[Maya Storm]

This puts me in mind of young love, new love and that constant feeling of disbelief. Well done.

[Shy Girl]

Carried me till the ending. I liked this piece very much. :) Emotion filled as well :)

[R.A. Youngblood]

This is very emotional write, i specially like the ending.
It's really like a dream, beautiful!
Thanks for sharing..Well done :D

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful ending to a outstanding poem. I like the way you led the reader toward the very good ending. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice feelings in this, sort of like a dreamy love.