Immoral Death

Shattered images emerge,

Illusions replaced by actuality set the stage.

Ever winding conversations replayed endlessly,

Gratuitous spirit abandoned with passing hours.

Passion denied, contemplating reality of true self

Condemnations from words spoken in disapprobation.

Indicated rumors with denial of recognition,

Loss of dignity to prevailing winds.

gw

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"denial of recognition,

Loss of dignity "

Two great aspects of the self. The false self wants recognition all the time(ego) and the true self or the higher self wants integrity and dignity. Thank you for sharing, sir...:)......

[MomzillaNC]

"Shattered images… " You can become entangled… lost in those images, creating illusions of reality.

[Deepwater]

Vito thank you for the review

[Vito]

Very interesting point, written to original style, holds the reader's interest and makes us think.

[Deepwater]

thank you for this review

[Patrick]

You write from your heart. I can feel that.This is so beautiful

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. The short statements made me wish to know more. You gave enough to keep the reader attention. This type of poetry need a story to follow. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Joe Butler]

I really like this, short but in a good way, don't need to make poems long if you have the intended impact with less words. Good :)

[Deepwater]

Thank you for this review Kayja

Gary

[Kayja Symphious]

Thank you for the contemplation.

[Kayja Symphious]

This is why most humans would rather lie to themselves and, while doing so, look down upon depressives. As if lying to one's self... makes them superior.

... humans...

Great write.