Denial of true feelings

What of this life

Love can never prevail,

Constantly denied by deceit.

Animosity at consenting heartache

Bewitched by the sprit on this journey

Endless mind games of allusions

What was meant to be, but never achieved.

Denial of true feelings with abandonment,

Vacillation of trust towards mankind

Unredeemed soul seeking the elusive inamorato.

Can mortals find remission within hope of being,

And achieve final ascendancy?

gw

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot said and questioned in the poetry.
"Denial of true feelings with abandonment,
Vacillation of trust towards mankind"
I believe we are built by kind elders and teachers. We must hold tightly to the things we believe. We must hope and trust the human race. I pray and hope. One day, whole world learn. War killed our children. The future. I liked your poetry. Made me think today. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[hardeep sabharwal]

Bewitched by the spirit of this journey
so nicely penned, and deep
well done dear

[Deepwater]

thank you for the review

[TL Boehm]

Can mortals find remission within hope of being,

And achieve final ascendancy?

This is deep indeed. What was meant to be but never achieved. I feel like I live in that sentence.
Well penned.

[Deepwater]

Thank you for this review