obsessive destructive fixation

obsessive destructive fixation

A Poem by delapruch
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na.

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told that it had nothing to do with

(why me why me why me why me)

you, told that you just weren’t the

(why me why me why me why me)

one, told that you had nothing in

(why me why me why me why me)

common, told that you both did

(why me why me why me why me)

not enjoy the same things, told

(why me why me why me why me)

that there was nothing wrong with

(why me why me why me why me)

your hair, told there was nothing

(why me why me why me why me)

wrong with the way you danced,

(why me why me why me why me)

told that yes you were witty, told

(why me why me why me why me)

that yes you had some good times,

(why me why me why me why me)

told that yes you had been thought

(why me why me why me why me)

to be someone special, told that

(why me why me why me why me)

you shouldn’t change yourself,

(why me why me why me why me)

told that you won’t stay this way

(why me why me why me why me)

forever, told that you will find

(why me why me why me why me)

another, told that you are a great

(why me why me why me why me)

person, told that you aren’t that

(why me why me why me why me)

old, told that you are a wonderful

(why me why me why me why me)

catch, told that it had all been worth

(why me why me why me why me)

something.

© 2012 delapruch


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great poem. very effective use of stream of consciousness. shows how that moment can never leave you mind. great work and very rare!

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delapruch
delapruch

nothingville, NY



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Bio: The writer we call delapruch has been writing since infancy. His first piece was scrawled on the inside of his mother’s womb. Long since published, the rights now reside in the hands o.. more..