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Tangled up in my hair, 

I leapt forward to an abrupt kiss, 

nothing amiss. 

No sign in the world around me

of anything left to confound me. 

I'm surely certain I could die happy

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Reviews

[RED]

Great work.

Have you tried to extend your poems' length?? I think you should try that sometime, and I am certain that you will do more than good.

[Emma-Leigh Ivy Cox]

I do have a collection of longer poems I am in the process of finding and putting up on this site. :) I do not really stick to any particular length when writing, I just let the poem create itself.

[RED]

I have got your point loud and clear.

And, you are right poems do really create themselves in our minds' eyes.

[Bear]

Nice rhyme sequence, cute airy poem with an uplifting feel and a fun read. Thank you for sharing.

[Emma-Leigh Ivy Cox]

Thank you for reading and giving your input. :)