Silent Calls

He dances around me 

in circles that crowd me, 

moving inward, like the walls. 

Butterflies yearning to burst outward, 

no one to answer their silent calls.

Reviews

[sunflowerpalette]

That "butterflies yearning to burst outward" line. :)

[RED]

Very nice indeed!

The rhythm went like a flowing stream!!

Way to go.

[Emma-Leigh Ivy Cox]

Thank you very much! :) Your kind words are much appreciated.

[Bear]

Very nice, haunting the last line "no one to answer their silent calls." It has an emotional quality that anyone can appreciate, great poem I look forward to reading your future works.

[Emma-Leigh Ivy Cox]

What is truly haunting is her uncertainty regarding the presence of his feelings, or lack thereof; the true cause for her butterflies. Thank you very much for your kind words. :) I look forward to reading yours as well.