Day

This poem is for all of those who are willing to spend time on there wildest dreams coming true.

I sit and wait
for an idea
a thought
inspiration
a daydream
a nightmare
There!
in the corner of a tired brain
the slightest
smallest
thinnest slice
of idea
I type
think
write
dream
Is it ready?
Is it good?
yes
I think so
this story
this mere idea
the time it has taken me
the thought
the sound
the feel
the smell
A DAY

Author's Note

I would really like some reviews. Please leave them.

Thanks!

Phillitup

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

yeah, this is very nice, it was quick and easy to read but has a nice beat to it, have you ever read Ellen Hopkins? The style behind this kind of reminds me of her writing, but just a tad, like an echo of it.

[Phillitup]

Thanks! I appreciate that! No, I haven't. Cool! Glad you liked it!

[angelface13]

It's interesting. I think that you should cut down the number of "a day"s that you have in there, though.

[Phillitup]

I changed it so I hope you like it...

[angelface13]

Much better! I like it a lot!