Maple Syrup

A Poem by Phillitup

Sticky
Smooth
Sap from a tree
Maple
Candy
From the eye can see
Yummy
Heritage
Tradition
O' Canada my country

© 2012 Phillitup

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Ashley G.

OMG, I love this! lol =3

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

True patriot love :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

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13 Years Ago

LOL I saw the title and I knew right away what was up :D

13 Years Ago

:) Fellow canadians rock!

13 Years Ago

RachelReaper

The fact that you said this had to do with your heritage is what made the poem, because it made it have meaning, which was the best part of it. :) Nice, this was cute.

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

13 Years Ago

Thank you!

angelface13

I like it! I don't exactly understand the line from the eye can see, though. Is it for the eye can see???

Posted 13 Years Ago

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13 Years Ago

No. It's like...nevermind. It's complicated to explain.

13 Years Ago

Can you explain???

13 Years Ago

IDK

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Added on October 21, 2012
Last Updated on November 11, 2012

Author

Phillitup

FL

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I am 14-years-old. I find inspiration all over the place: memories, ideas, things I notice. I like believing in things that others find impossible. I think that's the way I hope for a better future. .. more..