Desperate

on the spot thinking

Desperate for life to begin
the curtains to be drawn
the games ready to win

Desperate for something
a strand of who knows what
everything, anything

Desperate for a world
full of anything but empty
no sadness or grief

Desperate
Desperate
Desperate
Desperate

Author's Note

Review!!!!!!!!!!

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

Desperate for a world
full of anything but empty
no sadness or grief

sweet honesty felt here, these lines reveal a very caring, sensitive soul. this has great rhyme and flow, good job, thanks for sharing :)

[Phillitup]

thank you

[ms. barrie]

you welcome :)