Sick

Stuffed up nose
Throbbing head
Strewn tissues
Non slept in bed
Exhaustion
Heat
Cough drops
Hoarse cough
Miserable

Reviews

[David Scott]

How did you know? Ha. I think this topic could be "exploited" better, but a good poke at the pile of tissues here.
Honestly, be well! Ha

[Phillitup]

Thanks!

[Pax]

this is what i felt now....a horrible cold... stressful as annoying...
A well expressed poem..

[Phillitup]

thank you greatly

[Hanakuso]

Sounds like you have a horrible cold. I love the elegance of the lines - it's completely relatable. The poem worked a whole lot better because of the utter simplicity. Great work!

[Phillitup]

thank you very much...i dont enjoy writing drawn out poetry...i dont have the attention span for it :)

[Ees]

Very nice. It is almost a simple list, but put together it is a realistic portrayal of being sick and is poetic. I like simpler poetry. Most of the time extra stuff isn't needed.
Nice work.

[Phillitup]

thank you.....i dont like very long poetry either. add-ins dont really add anything. thats why all the contests I create have a line limit

[Ees]

Welome.

Nice, yeah I actually don't mind long poetry. What I really don't like is complex structure. They think it makes them sound smart, but when you break it down it is just a bunch of stolen flowers that don't mean anything!

[Phillitup]

:)

[Tori Hughes]

so, are you reading my mind or something? this is almost exactly how i am right now! :P very and relatable :)

[Phillitup]

thanks....no i don't read minds...haha.....i have a cold (and this next parts gonna sound silly) but i am terrified of medicine (because of elementary school guidance counselor) so yeah, good thing i dont have school tomorrow. three science assignments

[Tori Hughes]

ah. i dont swallow medicine, pill or liquid, well. which is ironic since i am on anti-depressants that require daily doses.

[Phillitup]

:) i refuse a lot of medicine to...i have to get a shot tomorrow though...:(

[Tori Hughes]

dang. sorry bout that. needles terrify me

[Phillitup]

me too