A Thing of the Past

thoughts whirl in my head
things of the past
things that you said

a mystic adventure
of mythical sorts

a daydream
that I repeatedly own

the days you still roamed
not dead in the grave

but darkness was prone
to taking you

where have you gone
when did you go

I want you back

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Awwh, I do think this is the first poem I read of yours. I'm impressed with it thoroughly too! It's so deep and sad. I know how it feels to lose someone so dear and close to you. It feels as if the world stops turning and you're alone in this cold and bitter world. I actually lost a friend from my other school last month. She wasn't a friend, just was actually my best friend. It felt so unrealistic for her to die at an early age from heart problems. I guess age doesn't matter when it comes to death anyways. Great job for laying your feelings out there! Nicely done. :)

P.S.-I love the picture that you have with it!

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Phillitup]

thank you for spending time reading and reviewing my work....im glad you like it. as a writer that feeling in a different world is what i crave.....:)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're welcome. I look forward in reading more of your work in the future! :) I love looking into other people's lives through their poetry that they post on here.

[Phillitup]

i agree..its interesting meeting someone for the first time through something they love.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Yeah most definitely! :)

[Brookypoo]

is this about someone who u actually lost

[Phillitup]

yes

[Brookypoo]

now I get it....who was it?

[Phillitup]

cam

[Brookypoo]

who was he to u

[Phillitup]

a little kid....we weren't related....he felt like my brother though....

[Brookypoo]

ok I'm sry that this happened to u

[Ashley G.]

I like this poem. It's interesting. =3

[Phillitup]

thank you

[morgann <3]

good

[Phillitup]

thanks