Black Holes

Black
darkness
swirling
sucking
the universe
in
masses
encompassing
the world
the land
everything
anything
until nothing remains
in our dimension

Author's Note

Inspired by what questions I have.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

in the theory of a black hole, once you enter the event horizon, everything is drawn helplessly into its irresistible vortex. you have done well, my friend, putting this concept into verse. i find this subject both fascinating and terrifying. love this write!

[Empty Spaces]

briliant!

[Phillitup]

thanks

[thenakedverse]

youre amazing... way beyond whatever level i was at when i was 13. please keep pursuing your writing, you have certainly found a niche ;)

[Phillitup]

thanks

[Jocie]

I like how u put it on the other side. and its really cool how ur inspired by questions u have
what r they?

[Phillitup]

well, a few weeks ago I was inducted into Future Physicists or Florida. Ever since the induction I've wondered about where these holes in time lead. Futhermore, if they could help us create teleportation (on a less intensified level of energy though)

[Jocie]

:) nice